Tree

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Tree



she grew into a tree
branches of honey
dipping leaves into pools of plenty
the forest fed her
the winds soothed her
the skies washed her
and the snows bruised her
before the end of time took her away
seed by seed
around the earth
sprouting sister
islands of mirth
around her girth
the squirrels would chatter
merry moments of mad hatter laughter
each bird in her branches
blessed her with natures gentle touch
the monarch
the lark
the magpie and owl
all friends of hers
she knows them so well
her tongue reaches deep into the earth
sucking from corpses
and bowels of red dirt
the life giving
intravenous gift
of water till it hurts
she fills her sails with the sound of angels
a tree of desire never meant for the fire
so grand is she
i can only
sit beneath her great leaves
and peer into the stars of her canopy
and wish that i were as majestic
as this silent, ageless wreath
of color and mystery

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scrye commented on Tree

07-24-2009

BRAVO *applauds* there are no words to describe this amad being a nature person this touches me deeply. and couldn't be happier to see it come from you. Pure talent and a 10 from me my friend. Again Bravo.

sammia commented on Tree

07-24-2009

wow this is beautiful. i like the flow of this. it does seem like everyone takes the beauty of nature for granted and dont care anymore. Great write.

am2anangel commented on Tree

07-22-2009

Absolutely amazing I was torn between deciding if you were really talking about a tree or a woman. lol! You gave this work life a pleasing vision of natures truest glory. Well done.

photochick commented on Tree

07-22-2009

wow this is amazing great poem about the beautiful things in nature that so many take for granted thanks for sharing this is great going into my favs that's for sure very powerful so much passion in each line a 10 all the way in my book I was able to picture every line as i read I look forward to reading more

exotic commented on Tree

07-21-2009

This is a wonderful piece, full of life in every word, your choose of words is deffinitely an inspiration for us poets, I enjoy this piece word by word..you are great amad

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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