Babble Beneath The Wind

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    A fun litlle poem. A little bit of a tonge twister.

    Babble Beneath The Wind

    Beneath the wind flows a babbling wither
    A babbling wither is what
    A bird with babble he drank from bottle
    A bottle of what
    He fly's with a babble
    Because of the bottle he drank
    He flew into a tree
    While looking for his nest
    To the babbling brook he fell
    Poor little babble he drank to much
    Beneath the wind fell
    To the babbling brook
    There on his grave was a stone that read
    Here lies poor little Babble
    Beneath the wind 
    By the babbling brook

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    RHPeat commented on Babble Beneath The Wind

    01-29-2010

    A very interesting poem Betty. I think you could cut the first word in the poem, it's not needed for the intent in the line. This so wonderful the way it has this broken feeling within the words of the poem which spell all the broken bird in the end. It reminds me of an old English poem I like called "west wind". it's a delight to read for sure. a poet friend RH peat

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/31/2010

    Well I am glad you liked it.I truly appreciate your thoughts.

    SavVySam commented on Babble Beneath The Wind

    01-13-2010

    I read this poem aloud and it trips off the tongue very smoothly! Nice alliteration! Well done!

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    Thank you so much. It was fun to write

    Charlie23 commented on Babble Beneath The Wind

    01-11-2010

    love the babel! This is cute, like the imagination you've brought to the riddle, very cool!

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    It just came to me. It was fun to write. Thank you

    countrypoet commented on Babble Beneath The Wind

    01-09-2010

    This is a cute poem and quite humorous.Very clever word play.I enjoyed this poem very much and have added it to my favorie poems file. Terry

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    I appreciate your valued opinion. Thank you

    koolmom0 commented on Babble Beneath The Wind

    01-08-2010

    This is really cute, very creative. It almost sounds like a riddle lol. Kool

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    It was fun to write. Thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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