In a clouded mist

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    God Bless the families who have lost children.

    In a clouded mist

     One in a million chance
    One in a million why me
    I loved I cared gave
    I did everything they told me
    The perfect nurse mom
    I followed all the rules
    In the end just a mom
    Human emotions filled my heart
    With questions I knew only God could answer 
    I wondered why him why me
    It was not for me to know
    He grew he loved
    Never complaining unconditionally loved
    Left in torment wondering when
    Was not for me to know then it came
    I held him in my arms only to watch
    His life slipping away
    Drawing from his body I saw his little spirit leave 
    In to a clouded mist much larger 
    Everything felt so pure at piece
    When they left my world crumbled
    I felt the pain like no other
    My heart could barely beat
    I could not breathe
    Oh God I cried why me 
    Though I knew not why I knew
    With Jesus he went to be

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    SavVySam commented on In a clouded mist

    01-15-2010

    Dearest Betty~So very heart rending and touching a read. I applaud you courage in sharing your story. God Bless
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    Grito commented on In a clouded mist

    01-13-2010

    My condolences for your loss, may God hold him in an embrace.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    When Heaven calls we will see them again. It was very painful ,tore me up litterly but God was there. I truley saw the mist. There is a Heaven. I saw an angel but the glory is with God.

    gogant commented on In a clouded mist

    01-13-2010

    I cry with you dear, Betty. I feel the pain with these words you write, and I can never see my little one, til Heaven calls. Thanks for writing such a beautiful piece.........................gogant
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    Thank you .It was very painful but somehow God gives us the strength to carry on. The painful memory lasts. I try to think of the good times.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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