In a clouded mist

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God Bless the families who have lost children.

In a clouded mist

One in a million chance
One in a million why me
I loved I cared gave
I did everything they told me
The perfect nurse mom
I followed all the rules
In the end just a mom
Human emotions filled my heart
With questions I knew only God could answer 
I wondered why him why me
It was not for me to know
He grew he loved
Never complaining unconditionally loved
Left in torment wondering when
Was not for me to know then it came
I held him in my arms only to watch
His life slipping away
Drawing from his body I saw his little spirit leave 
In to a clouded mist much larger 
Everything felt so pure at piece
When they left my world crumbled
I felt the pain like no other
My heart could barely beat
I could not breathe
Oh God I cried why me 
Though I knew not why I knew
With Jesus he went to be

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SavVySam commented on In a clouded mist

01-15-2010

Dearest Betty~So very heart rending and touching a read. I applaud you courage in sharing your story. God Bless

Grito commented on In a clouded mist

01-13-2010

My condolences for your loss, may God hold him in an embrace.

Bettysrainbow48

01/14/2010

When Heaven calls we will see them again. It was very painful ,tore me up litterly but God was there. I truley saw the mist. There is a Heaven. I saw an angel but the glory is with God.

gogant commented on In a clouded mist

01-13-2010

I cry with you dear, Betty. I feel the pain with these words you write, and I can never see my little one, til Heaven calls. Thanks for writing such a beautiful piece.........................gogant

Bettysrainbow48

01/14/2010

Thank you .It was very painful but somehow God gives us the strength to carry on. The painful memory lasts. I try to think of the good times.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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