The Rose

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  • Love

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    Love brought forth from a rose, like a flower blooms.

    The Rose

     There is a stillness in the air
    From beneath the warm sun
    A sweet smell scents the air
    The beginning of a bloom unfolds
    One by one gently revealing it's splendor
    From a bud to a full bloomed rose
    Such as life from a babe
    A blanket of pebbles warm the heart
    Of the beholder at hand
    The beginning of love unfolds
    At the end will weather but still remain
    A picture remains in the mind 
    The bouquet of love moves us
    At the end will lay in grief
    But still show love
    Covered with snow will begin
    The process new
     

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    icu2 commented on The Rose

    01-14-2010

    Like all sweet things in life the rose comes equipped with thorns. Oh, well, I guess we all have them now and then. A great poem!!!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/03/2010

    That certainly is true. I am glad you liked the poem.

    redbloodink commented on The Rose

    01-09-2010

    the beauty of the rose.... always compared with love...... and hand in hand they do go together..... Very well done...... red
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    Thank you so much,

    blackfootlady commented on The Rose

    01-09-2010

    I love this Betty, very nice.Youve inproved so much since i've been in here last.Keep up the good work.Love Char
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    Marsink commented on The Rose

    01-09-2010

    I see this rose as life enduring, till all else fades and still living as a memory in those whose life was imprinted by such a rose. Very telling cycle of life. Nicely manicured to delicate beauty.
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    Teardrops commented on The Rose

    01-08-2010

    Love is he rose in all colors and forms thanks for the read
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/08/2010

    So right Thank you

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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