When The Sun Sets-

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    Poem Commentary

    I dedicate this poem to those who have gone before us . 
    To those left behind who are  loved. 

    When The Sun Sets-

    When the sun sets you will see me leave
    I will smile rise up Heaven bound
    When the sun sets
    Leaving behind all that I was
    Just a memory from the past
    When the sun sets
    A new life a new beginning welcomes me
    My spirit will flourish
    Leaving behind only memories of the love I left behind
    Think of me when the sun sets be glad for me
    How happy I am
    I am leaving behind all the love I have for you
    When the sun sets do not cry
    I can see my family and friends again gone before me
    When the sun sets

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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on When The Sun Sets-

    03-29-2010

    This is a poem wrote from from the heart, thank you, everyone.

    Marsink commented on When The Sun Sets-

    11-02-2009

    I wonder if when the sun sets, you will be in a reality where there is no sun, but all is illumined by the light of the Son. There will be no more tears or sorrow, no pain, only joy... (Rev21:4)

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/03/2009

    I believe that it is all in Gods hands but we won't know until it is our time to go. Thank you for your comments.

    KtIrish commented on When The Sun Sets-

    11-02-2009

    Its beautiful and sad. I like the imagery too. Great write.

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/17/2009

    Thank you. I will be checking your work out too.

    gogant commented on When The Sun Sets-

    11-02-2009

    You show a lot of sadness in your heart with this piece, but as one reads deeper, it begins to merge into happiness. Truly nice........................................................g

    Bettysrainbow48

    04/02/2010

    I was looking back and saw You had sent me a comment.Thank you

    sherry122 commented on When The Sun Sets-

    11-01-2009

    Beautiful poem, my spirit certainly flourished reading your poem. My favorite line is "I am leaving behind all the love I have for you". Your poem certainly touched my heart, keep up with your good work;)

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/03/2009

    Hi Sherrry How are you? I truley like your poetry and enjoy reading it.My son said you write very well .

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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