My Computer

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It is a wonderful world brought to you through your computer. Life takes you there through it. A book of knowledge on  a screen.

My Computer

I have traveled the world seen many places
My computer takes me there
When life gets ruff money not enough
My computer opens the door
I have traveled to Spain sat on a boat
Been romanced with a song
Imagination took me there
Through my computer I have seen it
I have tasted foods cooked right on my stove
Recipes from abroad
Mountains with wide open spaces
Bring peace of mind
Green pastures flowers
All bring me joy
Like a book I go back to the past
History takes me there
Wore clothes I made myself
All through my computer
Try it you will find
The pleasure it brings me
Most of all far away we chat
My friend through an open door
My computer


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Lolee commented on My Computer

11-12-2009

The computer is an amazing animal. So nice to read each others poems. This is a really nice one...thanks. I am your cyber neighbor...just down the way and over a few circuts. lol! Take care love.

Bettysrainbow48

11/17/2009

How neat are you from my in of town?I can tell you love the Lord too.Who are you????

shannie76 commented on My Computer

11-04-2009

This is really awesome. I love your thoughts and your positive attitude.

Bettysrainbow48

11/04/2009

It is true. It is fun to meet people around the world that love poetry as I do and have something in common. The computer has brought the world together in many ways. Thank you I hope I didn't delete a part of this message only to start all over again. If I did I am sorry.

Bettysrainbow48

11/17/2009

Thank you very much. I will check in on your work too..

mamasan commented on My Computer

11-04-2009

Yes, this new dimension really teaches us what makes the world go round. And, thru this dimension we meet as fellow-poets and that is good. Nice flow of words and its obvious you have an never-ending list of friends, wherever. lol

Bettysrainbow48

11/04/2009

It is true .I have to admit the computer has brought to me friends like you that I truely appreciate poetry.It is fun to talk to people around the world plus we get an input on our work.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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