Because of you

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    I'd like to think that we could make someone feel just a little better if we offer a smile, a gestor it will be okay.
    A little piece of mind. The thought someone out there cares. When our house burned  down we lost everything. Not that long ago, a friend put a smile on my face. We had our lives, our memories. It will be okay. We lost our best two little friends our pugs. With a broken heart we made it through. With a hug and a smile. It will be okay. God bless people like that.

    Because of you

     There is a smile on my face
    Every time you walk by
    It softens my troubled heart
    Brings joy to my soul
    Happiness fills the air
    My troubles are forgotten
    If only for a moment
    You are a very special
    Brought into my life
    You remind me it will be alright
    A hand shake a hug  brightens my day
    Reminds me how much you care
    Trials  can disrupt our day  
    When I look at you it reminds me
    To keep the  smile on my face
    Who knows who I might see
    I just might make their day

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    Teardrops commented on Because of you

    12-09-2009

    wonderful poem thanks for letting me read it nice write
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/18/2009

    Thank you I am glad you liked it.

    SILKYTWEED commented on Because of you

    12-09-2009

    Beautiful Write....very simple but profoundly cheerful....Thanks for sharing!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK YOU CHeck out he bug

    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK You

    bloomingsun commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    The love of a friend can brighten any day, lighten any load... It's the things you can't see that matter most, and that can't be taken away. God bless...
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK YOU SO Much

    HarverTomsson commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    People are more important than things. You have a wealth within that many never will know. God bless you, HT
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    YOU GOT THAT RIGHT CHECK OUT THE BUG

    WinterFrost commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    They say if you make yourself be happy you will be happy. I'm not so sure of that but a smile usually gets smiles back. Be happy and do good work Winter
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    Thank you so much check out the bug

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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