The Lion Sleeps

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    The hunt prevails to feed the cubs that wait.

    The Lion Sleeps

     There is a rumble in the field
    The scramble of little paws
    Like thunder it's symbols are heard
    Like a herd of elephants roar
    Little cubs everywhere

    Carried on one leg grabbed by a cub
    Waits to be fed
    Bouncing like balls
    The jelly beans roll
    Symbols bounce off the sky 
    The lion sleeps

    An orange sky draped with blue
    Turns to a beautiful night
    The trees branches heavy with cubs
    The lioness at rest

    Night fall cools the night
    Where the servants crawl
    And animals prey
    The shaded trees protects the cubs
    WIth the sun brings a new day

    The lions will watch
    For the chance to join the hunt

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    thecross commented on The Lion Sleeps

    04-30-2010

    Very descriptive imagery in this piece an enjoyable write, well done.
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    LenaMP commented on The Lion Sleeps

    04-06-2010

    Very picturesque. I really enjoyed reading it. Very descriptive imagery. You painted a festive air in the circle of life's pattern.
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    SavVySam commented on The Lion Sleeps

    03-14-2010

    I can just feel the evening breezes cooling the Savannah, and imagine a tree draped with lounging lion cubs...Very visual piece! nice work!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/16/2010

    Thank you it does make you feel that way.I would not like to go there with all the dancer.

    Stryx commented on The Lion Sleeps

    03-12-2010

    I feel like I have been taken on a safari where wild animals are observed and treated with respect. Nice.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/13/2010

    Thank you I had fun with this one.

    gogant commented on The Lion Sleeps

    03-10-2010

    It's a good thing the lions sleep now and then, or there might be a lot more trouble for the other animals that constantly have to keep an eye out for the wild lioness on the prowl.......................gogant
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/10/2010

    I had fun writing this one . Well gogant I sure wouldn't want to face one.LOL

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