IN MY SADNESS

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    IMAGINATION  IS A WORLD OF IT'S OWN

    IN MY SADNESS

    IN HER SADNESS SHE FINDS NO SORROW
    NO WEEPING NO TOMARROW
    HER HEART GROWS COLD
    WITH A SWEETNESS INSIDE
    IT WAITS FOR SPRING\WHEN
    THE FLOWERS BLOOM
    LOVE IS TRUE LIKE
    THE MOON IS FULL
    EVEN THE MOON HAS CHANGE
    IN THE DEBTS OF THE OCEAN
    WE CALL THE SEA
    SOMEONE WAITS FOR ME
    DEEP ARE THE WATERS THAT
    WILL CARRY ME TO A PLACE
    I DON'T WANT TO BE
    SUN LIGHT WARM AND TRUE
    CARRIES ME THROUGH THE WAVES
    ON A RIDE TO A PLACE
     WHERE PEICE OF MIND WILL BE
    A BUBBLE RIDE WILL CARRY ME
    TO THE PLACE
    WHEN I ARRIVE
     TO THAT PLACE
     WHERE THE FLOWERS BLOOM
    THERE YOU WILL BE TO GREET ME
    ON THE BUBBLE THAT CARRIED YOU

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    blackfootlady commented on IN MY SADNESS

    12-13-2009

    Nice thoughts and It's the thought that counts.Churv

    Bettysrainbow48

    12/18/2009

    THank you

    WordSlinger commented on IN MY SADNESS

    12-03-2009

    :), A Bubbly poem of love, a full moon to think of, :) ty WE CALL THE SEA SOMEONE WAITS FOR ME that's my favorite part, :) WS

    Bettysrainbow48

    12/18/2009

    True love at the end right.I like writing all kinds of poetry .Thank you.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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