DEAR GOD

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DEAR GOD

DEAR GOD 
I OPENED up my heart today
To tell you how much I care
I really don't like my mission 
I know I should not ask 
Why did you send me here
I want to mingle with the angels
Hold hands with my friends
I am used to smelling flowers
Now pollution fills the air
Once there was no sadness
Now it is everywhere
Tears like  streams fill the waters
People hurting everywhere
People lie dying
Disease sickness in the air
What is my mission here
I feel the sin that put Jesus on the cross
You LORD gave your only son
I MUST unselfishly help those I can
The reward  is in the end
They will know you LORD
I will teach those I CAN
Then they will know
They will walk the streets of glory
In the end
Me LORD I am  still your angel
With a mission then I will walk the streets again
With you Lord smell the flowers so sweet
You LORD and a lot of new friends

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blackfootlady commented on DEAR GOD

12-13-2009

Betty i liked this alot .ty for the write,God Bless ,Churv

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

Thank you

bloomingsun commented on DEAR GOD

12-07-2009

Amen, this is a sentiment I can readily agree with. There is much discomfort and confusion in fulfilling one's missions sometimes. I like how this comes full circle and ends on an uplifting renewal of determination to do your best with what you are given.

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

I am glad you liked it.Thank you

gogant commented on DEAR GOD

12-07-2009

This is a statement of faith and hope that each of us have to cling to in order to receive an answer to our question of, why are we here ? I'm sure God has a good answer. A very nice poem, Betty...................................................................gogant

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

I believe we are here for a reason.

dancinghawk commented on DEAR GOD

12-07-2009

hey! another WA poet! some days our missions seem heavy ... but on those days, we must find a way to rejuvenate ... go where the flowers are ... if only in our minds ... for without the lightness of love, our missions will be impossible ... luv to u and ty for your soul-searching write! -dh

Bettysrainbow48

12/18/2009

Thank you I am glad you liked it.

HarverTomsson commented on DEAR GOD

12-07-2009

"I fel the sin that put Jesus on the cross" is more than a confessional line, it speaks of an enlarged state of consciousness within the being. Truely, the love of Christ constrains the disciple's mission and witness! An inspiring wirite.

Bettysrainbow48

12/07/2009

YOU ARE RIGHT JESUS MUST COME FIRST

Bettysrainbow48

12/07/2009

SORRY ABOUT THE KEY BOARD CAPS MY KEY BOARD IS MESSED UP.TIME TO GET A NEW ONE. THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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