Motivation

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    Motivation

     It takes a little motivation to get things going
    A little more to achieve
    A feeling of accomplishment
    A latter well climbed
    A moment of splendor
    Energy achieved by hard work
    A job well done
    A feeling of contentment
    Taken to the top
    You can see the future
    Promotion along the way
    Inhale exhale take a deep breath
    Somewhere along the way
    Get up you can do it
    Get the job done
    With a little motivation you can do it
    Motivation brings contentment satisfaction
    You will be glad that you did

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    EinStud commented on Motivation

    03-25-2010

    Well... how did you get my picture? lol! The poem was straight forward and succint.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/29/2010

    Oh sometimes I need a little motivation myself. Thank you

    NevillePark commented on Motivation

    03-23-2010

    Marie, you have the "gift of encouragement". You're born to be a cheerleader on the field of life's endeavors. (Don't lose your pen in the grass.)
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/29/2010

    Thank you I always enjoy your straught forward comments.

    Teardrops commented on Motivation

    03-09-2010

    You put the fire back in my heart thanks for the poem truly a shot in the arm Marie
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/09/2010

    Thank you Marie for your comment. I Always look forward to what you have to say.

    blackfootlady commented on Motivation

    03-09-2010

    Hello Betty,Sometimes we all get discourage but it's friends like you that keep us coming back.TY for this write it reminds me of that....CHURV
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/09/2010

    I am glad to see you back. Thank you

    RHPeat commented on Motivation

    03-02-2010

    Nice poem Betty: you might want a semicolon here (Get up; you can do it). Here you might want some rewording for the reiteration of (you can do it) doesn't do anything new for the poem. (With a little motivation you can do it) Maybe (with a little motivation contentment brings satisfaction/ you will be glad you did) also cutting the word (that) out of the line that's not needed for the intent. This poem is a winner to my heart. It says don't try just do it. Trying is an excuse to fail. Doing will always accomplish. That's ten gold stars form heaven if you as me. A poet friend..RH Peat
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/04/2010

    Thank you, your input means a lot to me. It has been a learning experience that I appreciate.

    EinStud

    03/25/2010

    Your critque is quite motivational too! Maybe that is what I need to do, study how to critique a poem? Peace.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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