Motivation

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Motivation

It takes a little motivation to get things going
A little more to achieve
A feeling of accomplishment
A latter well climbed
A moment of splendor
Energy achieved by hard work
A job well done
A feeling of contentment
Taken to the top
You can see the future
Promotion along the way
Inhale exhale take a deep breath
Somewhere along the way
Get up you can do it
Get the job done
With a little motivation you can do it
Motivation brings contentment satisfaction
You will be glad that you did

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EinStud commented on Motivation

03-25-2010

Well... how did you get my picture? lol! The poem was straight forward and succint.

Bettysrainbow48

03/29/2010

Oh sometimes I need a little motivation myself. Thank you

NevillePark commented on Motivation

03-23-2010

Marie, you have the "gift of encouragement". You're born to be a cheerleader on the field of life's endeavors. (Don't lose your pen in the grass.)

Bettysrainbow48

03/29/2010

Thank you I always enjoy your straught forward comments.

Teardrops commented on Motivation

03-09-2010

You put the fire back in my heart thanks for the poem truly a shot in the arm Marie

Bettysrainbow48

03/09/2010

Thank you Marie for your comment. I Always look forward to what you have to say.

blackfootlady commented on Motivation

03-09-2010

Hello Betty,Sometimes we all get discourage but it's friends like you that keep us coming back.TY for this write it reminds me of that....CHURV

Bettysrainbow48

03/09/2010

I am glad to see you back. Thank you

RHPeat commented on Motivation

03-02-2010

Nice poem Betty: you might want a semicolon here (Get up; you can do it). Here you might want some rewording for the reiteration of (you can do it) doesn't do anything new for the poem. (With a little motivation you can do it) Maybe (with a little motivation contentment brings satisfaction/ you will be glad you did) also cutting the word (that) out of the line that's not needed for the intent. This poem is a winner to my heart. It says don't try just do it. Trying is an excuse to fail. Doing will always accomplish. That's ten gold stars form heaven if you as me. A poet friend..RH Peat

Bettysrainbow48

03/04/2010

Thank you, your input means a lot to me. It has been a learning experience that I appreciate.

EinStud

03/25/2010

Your critque is quite motivational too! Maybe that is what I need to do, study how to critique a poem? Peace.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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