My Sprit

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There are reasons for everything in life. Finding the good through the bad helps keep us strong.

My Sprit

Though sometimes sadden by life's challenges
Puts life burdens on my mind and soul
Brings forth an inter beauty
A rose waiting to bloom
A worried spirit grows stronger
From the challenge of it all
Much giving with out taking makes you soar from the heart
Two souls meet forever connected
Joined by God forever  your friend
Forever buds blooming in harmony
Renewed presence endured  strength
The waiting well worth waiting for
Letting go brings a sadden heart
Joy will return not forgotten
When our spirits meet again

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SILKYTWEED commented on My Sprit

12-07-2009

Beautiful Write....I'm captured by this write, what a wonderful embrace of words....Thank You!

WordSlinger commented on My Sprit

12-02-2009

hmm, I love this, I write in this theme also, good huh, :) Welcome to OP, and thanks for your comments.. WS

BigDaddyCash commented on My Sprit

11-19-2009

I collect thoughts and Ideas from all the wonderful people I know. Each thought puts a stroke on there magnificent portrait. When there portrait is finished I hang it in my gallery of extraordinary people. My gallery grows each day and the paintings are priceless. Each day I look for the best in the people I love. When I see their God given talents, I’m thankful to share the gifts these amazing people give to the world. I feel blessed just to be in their presence, to feel the ora of their existence. Your poetry has spirited the desire for me to paint your portrait and hang it in my gallery of extraordinary writers. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words. LOL, BDC

Bettysrainbow48

11/21/2009

Your so kind. What kind of a picture would you paint?

Bettysrainbow48

11/28/2009

How are you? We are wondering if you have ever wrote any poems on the purity of snow? Beauty and purity.Your words would flourish with harmony.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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