Think of Me

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Many mothers remember the little games played with their children growing, becoming a memory within us. This poem is dedicated to my mother and many mothers who have played this game. It continues on. Mary passed away recently leaving behind her love for others inbeded in my soul and heart forever.Thank you mom for being the best a mother could be,for being there for me. I love you.I could not have asked for a better mother .We will be alright rest in peace.

Think of Me

Think of me
When the morning dew sets upon the leaves
I am the sparkle in your eyes
I am the dew without tears
I am the morning sun that sets upon your face
Feel the warmth of your love 
Think of me when the first twig grows
The dandelions flows
I'm the butter on your nose
Think of me with a smile on your face
For I am happy where I am at

Think of me with peace of mind
Remembering Jesus promised to be with me
Think of me with happiness
No pain do I feel now

When you are feeling empty and lost without me
Remember I am with  family and friends gone before me
My Lord Jesus loves me
The dew will sparkle
The sun will shine
The weeds and flowers will grow
Remember me with a smile on your face
I am the butter on your nose


I love you Mother. I dedicate this to you and all mothers.


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MrGee commented on Think of Me

02-22-2011

A touching work dedicated to a mother. Concise, and also good use of aliteration. I apolgize for taking so long to read the poem,however, I am having PC problems that need to be resolved. As to this poem I rate a 10

RHPeat commented on Think of Me

02-21-2011

Happy Mother's day, the poem does take a wide sweep that's for sure. A poet friend//RH Peat

HarverTomsson commented on Think of Me

02-11-2011

Emotionally true, if not strickly factually so, but there is innocent magic in make believe. Harv

Bettysrainbow48

02/11/2011

I appreciate your comment. She was a very loving person,

Bettysrainbow48

02/18/2011

This poem is made to remind someone special that when you see the morning dew or sun to think of me to remind you that you are loved..Thankyou

Teardrops commented on Think of Me

02-11-2011

WOW this is beyond beautiful its is a mothers day card , its what you feel when you hold your chid the first time . Thank you for writing the perfect poem for mothers Marie

Bettysrainbow48

02/11/2011

Thank you I have a lot of things to catch up with, poems to visit.Keep in touch.This poem was truly from the heart.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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