If you could see through my window

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  This reminds me of how hard it is for others who are less fortunate to have sight. How fortunate for those who do. God bless them all. May there someday be the cure needed.

If you could see through my window

If you could see through my window
You would truly understand
It gets clouded with an image of you
I can't see through
If you could see through my window
It would open your heart to a better understanding of me
The image I see is clouded but I know you are there
Watching me seeing me through
You are the best thing that ever happened to me
But I am blinded by it all
Blind I can not see
Hold my hand lead me
You are my inspiration
Someday when my eyes are free
My vision won't be clouded
You'll look through my window
There I will be watching me watching you 
Free from the clouds that hinder me

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Teardrops commented on If you could see through my window

04-03-2010

to walk in someone elses shoes or to see threw there eyes makes you truly blessed For you can see how blessed you are and how lonely it would be without your loved ones great poem thanks Marie

Bettysrainbow48

04/03/2010

You are a very sweet good person. Thank you for the complement.I enjoy your poetry too.

Lolee commented on If you could see through my window

04-02-2010

This is exactly why kindness is so monumental. We just cannot see what the other person is going through, or where they have been. You are a woman aware of others in a major way...this makes you very, very important. Take care dear lady.

Bettysrainbow48

04/03/2010

Hey I thought you were going somewhere. I am glad you are not.Thank you for the comment.

Bettysrainbow48 commented on If you could see through my window

01-01-2010

Seeing through the eyes of another gives light. Impaired vision blocks the world out as we see it. It inlightens our world to what others may not see.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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