If you could see through my window

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      This reminds me of how hard it is for others who are less fortunate to have sight. How fortunate for those who do. God bless them all. May there someday be the cure needed.

    If you could see through my window

     If you could see through my window
    You would truly understand
    It gets clouded with an image of you
    I can't see through
    If you could see through my window
    It would open your heart to a better understanding of me
    The image I see is clouded but I know you are there
    Watching me seeing me through
    You are the best thing that ever happened to me
    But I am blinded by it all
    Blind I can not see
    Hold my hand lead me
    You are my inspiration
    Someday when my eyes are free
    My vision won't be clouded
    You'll look through my window
    There I will be watching me watching you 
    Free from the clouds that hinder me

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    Teardrops commented on If you could see through my window

    04-03-2010

    to walk in someone elses shoes or to see threw there eyes makes you truly blessed For you can see how blessed you are and how lonely it would be without your loved ones great poem thanks Marie
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/03/2010

    You are a very sweet good person. Thank you for the complement.I enjoy your poetry too.

    Lolee commented on If you could see through my window

    04-02-2010

    This is exactly why kindness is so monumental. We just cannot see what the other person is going through, or where they have been. You are a woman aware of others in a major way...this makes you very, very important. Take care dear lady.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/03/2010

    Hey I thought you were going somewhere. I am glad you are not.Thank you for the comment.

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on If you could see through my window

    01-01-2010

    Seeing through the eyes of another gives light. Impaired vision blocks the world out as we see it. It inlightens our world to what others may not see.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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