He Barked

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    This just a fun poem to write.

    He Barked

     He barked he roared like a lion
    Marking his territorial  boundaries
    Time of his own waits
    Hidden in the shadows
    Growls to be heard
    Unaware unafraid she knows
    He's a puppy inside
    He melts with her touch
    His growling wines
    For the softness of her touch
    She waits content knowing full well
    He makes time for her
    He's the head of his home
    Yet shares his domain
    With only her
    Lets his lioness speak
    When night time calls
    He cuddles them all
    His bark now purrs
    Like a kitten she knows

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    Springsize commented on He Barked

    02-05-2010

    I so like this, having strong ties with the cat-family... and loving most their warm cuddles, followed by an appreciation of their ability to keep a straight face, considering how much they play....
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/05/2010

    I am glad you liked it. Thank you.

    Teardrops commented on He Barked

    02-04-2010

    Betty loved the poem and the way you discribe him how could you not love him Marie
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/04/2010

    Thank you It was a fun poem to write.

    gogant commented on He Barked

    02-04-2010

    Some of us have to roar to be heard...others only need to purr. A sweet little poem by you, Betty......................................gogant
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/04/2010

    You are so funny gogant but this is true isn't it.

    Hampton commented on He Barked

    02-04-2010

    Well crafted poetic work that conveys its warm message without frills and gimmicks. Nice.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/04/2010

    Thank you I like this one myself. It was fun to write.

    dahlusion commented on He Barked

    02-04-2010

    Sexy and comforting in your sweet, poetic voice. Thank you for your words.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/04/2010

    Thank you I appreciate you looking in on poems.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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