Something about you

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Growing up with a soul mate.

Something about you

Upon the tree that carried me
We hug from it's branches
We played until dawn
We captured it all
Counting all the stars


The world a pond us grew
With the touch
Of your hand in mine
You were a friend of mine

Though young I knew
There was something about you
I just could not explain
The feelings that grew within
With age youth tormented my mine
There was something about you

I could not understand just what it was
Through our teens we grew
The proms the games the dates we had
All just fell in place

Then one day we both grew up
You looked at me a different way
I turned away only to look back
Then focused on your eyes

You did not look the same
A missing link now had an understanding
Of what was hidden in my heart
Now the look I Receive
It takes me to your soul 


Together forever is where I want to be
Held within your arms
It was with me you were meant to be









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jyothi commented on Something about you

04-04-2010

You're lucky one who's always getting what deservs.

Bettysrainbow48

04/05/2010

I Try to be kind, yet not afrade to open my mind to what I am thinking.Most of all remebering others have feeling too. All do there best. Thank you.

SavVySam commented on Something about you

04-03-2010

"We captured it all Counting all the stars" It sounds like hearts were also captured! lol This a gentle and promise filled piece! Very nice!

Bettysrainbow48

04/03/2010

Thank you I appreciate the thought.

Tempy commented on Something about you

03-14-2010

The world a pond us grew With the touch Of your hand in mine You were a friend of mine this was a pleasure to read. i enjoyed every line. the flow was without fault.

dahlusion commented on Something about you

03-10-2010

Ah! Youth! And so perfectly penned here in this poem. Bravo!!

Bettysrainbow48 commented on Something about you

03-09-2010

Children learned repect from parents not to call each other names. There was no room for anything but play then, ( we grew up.) LOL

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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