Something about you

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    Growing up with a soul mate.

    Something about you

     Upon the tree that carried me
    We hug from it's branches
    We played until dawn
    We captured it all
    Counting all the stars


    The world a pond us grew
    With the touch
    Of your hand in mine
    You were a friend of mine

    Though young I knew
    There was something about you
    I just could not explain
    The feelings that grew within
    With age youth tormented my mine
    There was something about you

    I could not understand just what it was
    Through our teens we grew
    The proms the games the dates we had
    All just fell in place

    Then one day we both grew up
    You looked at me a different way
    I turned away only to look back
    Then focused on your eyes

    You did not look the same
    A missing link now had an understanding
    Of what was hidden in my heart
    Now the look I Receive
    It takes me to your soul 


    Together forever is where I want to be
    Held within your arms
    It was with me you were meant to be









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    jyothi commented on Something about you

    04-04-2010

    You're lucky one who's always getting what deservs.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/05/2010

    I Try to be kind, yet not afrade to open my mind to what I am thinking.Most of all remebering others have feeling too. All do there best. Thank you.

    SavVySam commented on Something about you

    04-03-2010

    "We captured it all Counting all the stars" It sounds like hearts were also captured! lol This a gentle and promise filled piece! Very nice!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    04/03/2010

    Thank you I appreciate the thought.

    Tempy commented on Something about you

    03-14-2010

    The world a pond us grew With the touch Of your hand in mine You were a friend of mine this was a pleasure to read. i enjoyed every line. the flow was without fault.
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    dahlusion commented on Something about you

    03-10-2010

    Ah! Youth! And so perfectly penned here in this poem. Bravo!!
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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Something about you

    03-09-2010

    Children learned repect from parents not to call each other names. There was no room for anything but play then, ( we grew up.) LOL
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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