In the depths of mind

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Our minds are full of the knowledge and memories created for us, by us. . It is a wonderfful opprotunity at our door step. The world we live in is full. .

In the depths of mind

In the depths of my mind is a vast ocean
Of memory's past like waves surfacing
Bringing forth each day a new wave
Bright as the morning sun
Shining down across my ocean like stars
Reaching for a new approach to an open door
A book of knowledge preexistence forthcoming
Another page added to life's memories
My thoughts wonder with a will to succeed
Achievements, goals widen my arising adventures
Looking forward to the next morning sun
Reopens a new day
Another thought lesson learned
The ability to know how
One door shuts only to open another
Bubbles of knowledge surface
Stored in my vast ocean rolls with the waves
Like the rush of a wave
Brightens my mind with knowledge
Makes my day

 

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Marsink commented on In the depths of mind

01-09-2010

I really admire the desciptive tools you've used in this artform. It's just a great work of heart! I tip my hat to you.

Bettysrainbow48

01/15/2010

Thank you so much Marsink Best to you.

countrypoet commented on In the depths of mind

01-08-2010

The beautiful imagery that you use here inspires and reveals a strong reason for celebrating each new day and the wonderful possibilities that it presents.Thank you for sharing this excellent poem. Terry

Teardrops commented on In the depths of mind

01-08-2010

you are living life and open to new experiances Never close your mind to new ideas thanks for the read

Bettysrainbow48

01/15/2010

I thank you to for reading it.

gogant commented on In the depths of mind

01-03-2010

You give life to the dawning of a new day...so many things lay in store...by opening that door. Very nice, Betty............................g

Bettysrainbow48

01/06/2010

You inspire me to write when I see your good work too. Thank you so much. Thank you for reading my poems.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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