Change

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Change is a good thing carried by emotions.

Change

It is hard to change
When you are stuck on yesterday
Comfort brings the touch of home
Home brings contentment
Contentment brings no pain
No feelings of flight
Change can be up lifting
When applied just right
A new beginning a cleansing
A clean sweep before the dawn
The beginning of a new day
Soiled years left behind
Memories made new
A better tomorrow leaving behind yesterday
A new job brings a promise to succeed
Leaving behind the old
All manifested because of change
You've got to want it bad enough
To let change ride through

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WordSlinger commented on Change

03-16-2010

I love your strength, we need to shake the tree, so we can all have positive change, thank you, WS

Bettysrainbow48

03/17/2010

I try thank you

MalikPeterson commented on Change

03-14-2010

this is very true. Often times...we don't see how easy a thing change can be...and often times we don't completely change when we embark on the mission to do so :)

gogant commented on Change

03-14-2010

You say it right, Betty.......get rid of all the bad things....sweep them up, and bring in the new tomorrows...............................g

Stryx commented on Change

03-14-2010

I like the way you think, and reason. It shows well in your writing.

SavVySam commented on Change

03-14-2010

I love everything about this uplifting gem of inspiration! A truly wonderful read! Thank you for sharing this Betty! Write on!;)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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