It was September

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    It was September

    It was September the wind was blowing
    Sofly across my face embracesing my soul
    Oh if I could have took flight
    I would have spread my wings
    Towering over the mountains
    Enjoying the view with you
    A dive with a twirl a roll
    Peacefullysmoothly becoming one 
    A splendid feeling of peice 
    I'd sit on the clouds hold hands with you
    But since I can't will a bench do
    Happy Valentines Day My Darling

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    gogant commented on It was September

    01-31-2010

    A jolly old giddy poem...cute and comical....really nice, Betty.

    Marsink commented on It was September

    01-14-2010

    A gravity breaking fantasy, pulled down to earth by a park bench. Excellent and humorous in last stanza!

    stever commented on It was September

    01-13-2010

    ahhh this is goooy sweet i love sugar...ooohh honey honey you are my sunshine girl...love it xoxoxoxo

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/14/2010

    Thank you, glad you liked it.

    Charlie23 commented on It was September

    01-11-2010

    This is a cool poem! What better way to partner, than to take the dive together...but then again, a park bench is just as nice.

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/11/2010

    Maybe by plane. LOL A little humor never hurts.A good laugh is music to the soul.

    indiancowboy91 commented on It was September

    01-10-2010

    I guess a bench is as good a place as any to hold hands and love each other, and fly away to some enchanted marvelous place.

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/11/2010

    A little humor. Thank you

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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