You left me

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  • Happiness

    Poem Commentary

    what can seem endless can be a new fresh begining.

    You left me

     You left me all a lone 
    To face this world
    I didn't know you never said
    How much you loved me so

    Rain mixed with tears fell on my face
    The day you left
    I did not understand
    Why seemed to venture in
    My tormented mine

    I gave you my all
    Every breath I took
    My thoughts were of only you

    When you left I found another
    Who gave me his heart
    For the first time life began

    He gives me his all as I give him mine
    When I think of you and why you left
    I know not why it brought me happiness.

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    Teardrops commented on You left me

    03-16-2010

    this is a awsome poem and yes love can be found again and you say it so beautiful thanks Marie
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    NevillePark commented on You left me

    03-16-2010

    Adventures in the land of loves lost and found with grass roots realism . Tailor made for a novella. .
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/16/2010

    Thank you, sad but happiness in the end.

    Tempy commented on You left me

    03-14-2010

    I gave you my all Every breath I took My thoughts were of only you When you left I found another Who gave me his heart For the first time life began these lines are my favourite. keep up the good work
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    Bettysrainbow48

    03/16/2010

    Thank you I appreciate your thoughts.

    SavVySam commented on You left me

    03-14-2010

    "I gave you my all" That about says it all....You poured your heart out in this deeply reflective poem... I am happy it ended on an up note! Great job!
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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on You left me

    03-13-2010

    He had his qualities too but when stardom struck, it changed him..When he got around to realizing wanting me back, I found my soul mate and happiness.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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