I'M NOT GONE

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  • Death

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    IN OUR SORRY FROM  LOSS, IT IS NICE TO REMEMBER WE CAN BE THERE IN YOUR DREAMS. BE SEEN IN THE FACES WE LEAVE BEHIND. REMEMBERED IN THE WORDS I LOVE YOU.

    I'M NOT GONE

     I AM NOT GONE
    I AM IN YOUR MEMORY
    I AM IN YOUR DREAMS 
    YOU WILL FIND ME IN THE FACES I LEAVE BEHIND
    YOU WILL FIND ME THERE
    I WILL COMFORT YOU AND SAY I LOVE YOU
    LIKE I DID BEFORE
    I WILL REMIND YOU THAT I AM OK
    I WILL SEE YOU IN YOUR DREAMS
    SHARE MEMORIES FROM THE PAST
    WE WILL DO THE THINGS WE USED TO DO
    OH THE FUN WE WILL WILL HAVE
    I'LL HUG YOU AND YOU'LL HUG ME
    I WILL COMFORT YOU THERE
    I CAN ONLY COME TO YOU IN YOUR DREAMS
    DON'T WORRY I'LL BE OK
    I WILL SEE YOU THERE IN YOUR DREAMS 

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    kdarcy commented on I'M NOT GONE

    11-30-2009

    It is the heartfelt things that mean the most, for the spirit always stays behind, be well, I enjoyed the read, k
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    HOW SILLY THOUGH I CAN NOT ERASE IT YET, IT SHOULD SAY, IN OUR SORROW. NEW GLASSES NEEDED.LOL ON THE POET COMMENT PLACE.

    redbloodink commented on I'M NOT GONE

    11-30-2009

    Betty, this is such a beautiful write...... I really liked how you exspressed how loved ones that are gone are there even in people we meet..... In our dreams and memories as well..... Great job.... blessings.... Red
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    Thank you I appreciate your thoughts.

    squadbuddy954 commented on I'M NOT GONE

    11-30-2009

    This poem really touched me because I can hear people saying this to encourage their love ones to still strive for success "Success is my addiction"
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    HI HOW ARE YOU. I TOO WOULD LIKE TO THINK THIS POEM WOULD BE INCOURAGEMENT FOR THE PEOPLE WE LOVE AND OTHERS.I WOULD WANT OTHERS TO GO ON TO BE THE BEST THEY COULD BE. WE WILL BE THERE IN DREAMS.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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