I LOVE YOU

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    LOVE IS A VERY IMPORTANT WORD IN OUR DICTIONARY. IT CARRIES A POWERFUL TOUCH WITH A VARIETY OF MEANINGS OR WAYS. IT IS SOMETHING PEOPLE NEED.  MAN AND WIFE OR A FAMILY BOND OR MY FRIEND WHO IS ALWAYS THERE. MAY YOU BE BLESSED WITH A HEART THAT TRULY KNOWS THE MEANING. THIS POEM IS ABOUT SOUL MATES .

    I LOVE YOU

     I LOVE YOU HOW OFTEN I SAY THOSE WORDS
    I WANT YOU TO KNOW
    I MEANT EVERY WORD
    YOU TAKE THE TIME
    TO LET ME KNOW
    JUST HOW MUCH YOU CARE
    YOUR HAND OUT STRECTHED WITH MINE
    GIVES WARMTH TO MY SOUL
    I CAN NOT EVEN AMAGINE
     LEAVING YOU BEHIND
    SHOULD I LEAVE THIS WORLD OR YOU MINE
    I ONLY KNOW MY HEART MY SOUL
    TOUCHES YOURS INSIDE
    YOU ARE MY SOUL MATE DEVINE
    WITH EVERY BREATH I TAKE
    THE  ESSENCE OF YOUR SOUL TOUCHES MINE
    THERE IS A JOY IN MY HEART WHEN YOU WALK BY
    SENDS MY HEART IN A TWERLE
    WITH MY FACE ALL FLUSHED
    MY HEART IN A WERLE
    WITH A BIG SMILE ON MY FACE
    I WANT YOU TO KNOW
    I LOVE YOU
    WITH YOU FOREVER I'LL STAY THEN
    I'LL LEAVE THIS WORLD
    LOVING YOU

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    dahlusion commented on I LOVE YOU

    02-04-2010

    This should be packaged and giving as a present to everybody in this world. Powerful!!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/05/2010

    Thank you I am glad you liked it

    koolmom0 commented on I LOVE YOU

    11-30-2009

    What a beautiful love poem. Make sure you share this with the one you love. Thank you for sharing. Koolmom
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    THANK YOU I DID .HE LOVES IT.DO YOU THINK IT WOULD MAKE A CARD?

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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