My Valentine

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My Valentine

The first day I saw you I knew
It was your face I  first saw
Your heart  touched my soul
Your eyes sent me flying
My heart began to thump
To a beat of a different tune
Like melted chocolate so sweet devine
Your love and mine intertwine
Together forever your heart and mine
Your candy kisses coated with love
Remind me your mine
How lucky am I
This Valentines day
I want you to know
How much I  love you so
Your hand in mine
Still melts my heart
Your eyes penatrate my soul
Because darling I still love you so

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indiancowboy91 commented on My Valentine

01-10-2010

If my lady spoke words as these, I think our igloo would melt. Good work.

Bettysrainbow48

01/11/2010

Thank you I appreciate that comment.

Marsink commented on My Valentine

01-09-2010

No question if love is here to stay...taken up residence and making the house a home. This is what love should be for all who venure into love's waters. Very lovely to be sure!

Bettysrainbow48

01/09/2010

Thank you I appreciate the complement.

mangeoart commented on My Valentine

01-08-2010

A man would be proud to have this poetry written just for him alone. It shows your love for that special one so sweetly.

Bettysrainbow48

01/09/2010

A gentleman would know. Thank you

Teardrops commented on My Valentine

01-08-2010

Now you have put into words for the entire world to read of how tuly much you love him . The poem is form you heart you can tell and he will know it also thanks for letting me read this .

Bettysrainbow48

01/09/2010

Thank you I appreciate your input on this. Love does come from the heart.

ayyan commented on My Valentine

01-08-2010

Bettyrainbow, I have read the poem valentine fully. It is a good composition of the love. I agree the sense of love is fully shown The soul has taken a nice part of it. - ayyan-

Bettysrainbow48

01/09/2010

Thank you so much.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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