Blue

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    Blue, one of my favorite colors

    Blue

    Blue is the sky
    Ascends above me
    Mystifys my mind
    Clouds they float


    Blue is the ocean
    Deep is the sea
    Earths water feeds it

    Blue are the stones
    That grow beneath
    The earths gems
    Beautify my hands

    Blue is the color of peice
    Softly it mellows

    Blue is a song
    Music to my ears
    I love to dance to
    It yodels

    Blue is my heart
    When you are gone
    Fills my eyes with tears

    When I lay down
    On my blue soft sheets
    My mind floats away
    Deep is the ocean
    I sleep



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    BigDaddyCash commented on Blue

    02-15-2010

    Beautiful you are a poets poet. You wanna know smethin, Blue is my color too.---------- THE BLUE LAGOON Silhouettes surrender to the symphony of summer hollow. Shadow dancers gently sway beneath the marquee shadow. Rhapsody squares beyond the thrashing of reality. Heavenly bodies in all glory meet the challenge of mortality Resonate scenes of twilight create illusions beyond the horizon. Magnificent thoughts and memories lost in the setting sun. Lucifer simply smiles as he envelopes lost and weary stories. Happy children gather heartfelt treasures as lives unfold. The sun sets, the moon rises and the red roses bloom. Life goes on in triumph a vision on the Blue Lagoon
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/28/2010

    Thank you William blue is such a pieceful color. They say resting in a sky blue room brings piece to mind rest to the body..

    gogant commented on Blue

    02-11-2010

    A thousand shades of blue, and all its hues...........a quiet ride on spirits of color............................................................gogant
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/11/2010

    Thank you I love the color blue

    Bettysrainbow48

    02/28/2010

    I like the color blue. It is a cool color to have around.Thank you.

    Marsink commented on Blue

    02-10-2010

    And blue is the color of royalty... This is a beautiful poem and full of images to mystify and entertain! Very lovely, and I don't feel blue. Thanks for sharing, Betty
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/11/2010

    It is the color of royality and I love the color. It is so peiceful.

    dahlusion commented on Blue

    02-10-2010

    Beautiful honoring of the most luscious of all colors.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    02/10/2010

    Thank you I like blue too.Thank you for checking in.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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