"Psalm 93" My rewrite of it. I mean no disrespect or anything like that

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    I am not attempting to add or detract from the original Psalm. I just thought it might be cool to add my perspective and interpretation of David's beautiful writing here.

    "Psalm 93" My rewrite of it. I mean no disrespect or anything like that

     "Psalm 93"

    [A Modern Day Version]


    1.The beauty of creation,
    adorns everlasting God,
    in powerful beauty,
    He is adorned.
    His creation is forever,
    unchanging forever.
    2.Forever and ever,
    You have been exceedingly great.
    3.Oceans dance with joy,
    their breakers sing of You;
    their awesome waves, drum eternity.
    4.As magnificent the songs
    they drum unto You;
    You are more magnificent.
    More beautiful than the songs,
    their breakers sing;
    You are exceedingly great.
    5.Your greatness upholds the beauty,
    of creation;
    so sovereign and sacred forever;
    as forever You are.

    Sam Hyde

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    toredbloodink commented on "Psalm 93" My rewrite of it. I mean no disrespect or anything like that

    03-14-2017

    He is that He is.... And He testifies of us as we should praise Him over the glory of His creation.... God bless you sir and this remake of His song He put in your heart... Red
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