WHISPERS ON A BREEZE

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    I borrows this title from another poet, but I forgot who it was. sorry. the title inspired me to write my own version. So if this was your title thank you.

    WHISPERS ON A BREEZE

    In the silence,
    I listen.
    for the softest utter
    of a word.

     I listen for the sweetest,
    words ever heard.

    A rustling breeze interrupts
    my meditation.

    Did I only imagine,
    the sweet sensation?

    the whispers on
    the breeze?

    Where you really there,
    proclaiming
    to love me?

    Have I let my imagination,
    run away with my heart?

    A fluttering leaf in my face,
    causes me to start.

    The distraction makes me cry out.

    And in my journey,
    I suddenly pause.

    With words still undeciphered,

    I feel at a loss.

    I strain to hear the words,
    that will bring me to my knees.

    Sadly I fear,
    they are lost.
    As whispers on a breeze.

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    Olan01 commented on WHISPERS ON A BREEZE

    12-10-2010

    you have created a fine poem a calmness that speaks clearly. Meditation is the key to unlocking understanding of self, love, peace and eternity. I particularly like the title, lol. Love, peace and freedom is more than a whisper; it is a roar. Olan.
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    winterkou commented on WHISPERS ON A BREEZE

    11-20-2010

    very nice imagery, i love the last lines, very good write
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on WHISPERS ON A BREEZE

    11-12-2010

    You have really conveyed a forlorn and confused state of mind in this one. The pain is palpable and the flow is great. Well done.....E
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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