A QUIET END

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    A QUIET END

    Our end, in this beginning,

    So easily expressed

    Through words softly spoken

    A caress devoid of touch

    Marking a trail along my breast

    Then there was nothing

    For I had ceased to feel

    And laughed in madness

    For something that I think is real

    A searing pain burns deep

    Withing my crumbling mind

    Till there is nothing,

    My sorrow crying tears

    I cannot shed

    Spining into the void

    A place where everything

    Which is not is,

    Where man meets God

    And life is blurred

    Here, we leave

    To spend eternity apart,

    Wandering a world

    Bereft of colour,

    Shaking trees a small

    Part of history

    Just to see leaves fall

    And life begin anew

    In a tiny accorns heart

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    atrophy42 commented on A QUIET END

    06-02-2009

    This poem painted such a deep picture for me. Beautifully written. Sank into my heart I will read more of these.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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