The Bible's evil deed

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    The Bible's evil deed

    This poem was written when one of my friends told me his parents reaction to him being Gay, the worst type of reaction. One which should have them shunned by any.

    Walking together was their best moment
    Or so they thought
    The tenderness that filled them
    The increase of their hearts
    Pure heaven
    Two souls lost in a sea of fear

    Living with contempt
    That’s what he always used to say
    Living in exile
    Was what ended our day

    But how luck changes
    How the Gods do hear our prayers
    For in the peace of the night
    Love burst from their crowded hearts

    Spilling its rich joy
    Deep into the other
    Pounding with ever pressing urgency
    Yet underlined with care

    It was then they found their exit
    Their release from society
    In those quiet hours
    Before the dawn has risen

    Night after night they met
    And standing face to face
    They swore that this would be the ending
    That they would say goodbye

    For who in their families
    Would bear the shame
    Would face humiliation
    And still stand tall

    Ingrained upon their souls
    Etched deep within their minds
    Was the idea that this was wrong
    So spoke the words of their God

    Yet they still met
    Still shared release
    Still longed the others touch
    Still craved the tightness
    Their fire was not to be extinguished
    Again they stood
    Face to face
    Two men

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    dangedmanjr commented on The Bible's evil deed

    03-11-2009

    even though I may not agree with the subect matter, this piece is very well written and truly conveys all the emotion and pain...very touching.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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