On Parting

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    On Parting

     Catching tear drops in my hand
    So they don't hit your face
    Lying so peacefully besides me,
    Tomorrow we will say goodbye
    But will I ever let you go?
    You used to be a burden,
    A reluctant relationship 
    Turned into a passionate love,
    I said I'd come when you flew away
    But now I can only cry
    My silent, trembling goodbye
    I watch time tick away
    And think what a waste
    This time spent sleeping is,
    Tomorrow night I will be alone
    And you, you will be home,
    You asked me to come
    Leave everything behind for you,
    You and this growing love,
    Everything in me said go,
    But here I am rising,
    Preparing to face a day alone,
     

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    starfox115 commented on On Parting

    02-24-2010

    ok, fre style. am definately not a fan of these kind of writing. its too easy. THe message was clear and its nicely done.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

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